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Paragraph 1: Have you ever did cross Country. before? Well on Thursday our school did cross country. and it was scary for me.I was feeling nervous when I was walking to the starting line. when Mr Burt said “on your marks, set go!” said Mr Burt. when I started to run I was feeling so scared.
Paragraph 2: AS I was running I started being nervous but when I got to Miss Lavakula I felt confident. I had to stop a couple of times because I had a stitch
and because I was tired. When I got outside of the gate I felt mud in my toes it was squishy and slimy. and it was a long. When I got to the playground I sprinted to the finished line.
Paragraph 3: I felt so tired and I enjoyed running because it was fun. I didn't enjoy the mud because it was going everywhere on me. Next time I hope to run without stopping and come first.
I was extremely impressed with the effort you put in to cross country this year. Keep it up Patricia.
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