Monday, 3 August 2015

Bean bag hire 3 pt

Walt: pursued the reader to agree with our message.

Bean bags for hire

Bean bags are cozy to sit on and you can  to relax on it.

Bored of sitting on a chair or floor why don’t you come and buy one comfortable,soft and warm bean bag instead of sitting on a chair chair or on the floor bean bags are always hire.

The bean bag sculpt moulded into the a form shape of your choice. You can choose  to sit on the bean bag, or use it to sit back on.

The cushiony  bean bags come in two multi colours. A fantastic  blue one, and a incredible green one. It’s your pick which one you wish to sit on.

The amount  is 3pt. You pay formerly at the starting point of the day and then you can use the beanbag for the rest of the day.

Remember for $$$$3pt you can sit at a beanbag during class the whole time all day.

For this task we were talking  about advertising, so we did it about bean bags for hire because since team 4 are doing pt so if we would like a bean bag we would pay 3 pts for it. we recraft a sentence that mr goodwin wrote but we made it sound more interesting. I used thesaurus to help me find more juicy words that i can often use.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Patricia,
    I really like the way you used paragraphs in your writing. Maybe next time you can check you work and read it out loud to a buddy.


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