Thursday, 22 October 2015

!!!San Diego Zoo!!!!

Walt: think about my purpose and reader by planning my recount.

Whoop whoop we are going to the zoo. San diego zoo is full of animals but from different places. There are 4350 animals at the San diego Zoo How amazing!!!!.

Introduction 2:         
Yayy we are going to the zoo, seeing all the awesome animals at San Diego Zoo. Wait a minute we are not going to the zoo, we are going on a cool virtual tour experience in our chrome books. Is there animals that are better than other animals from other habitats. 

Vocab to help my recount:
Experience, animals,virtual,amazing,awesome,incredible,zoo,san diego,exploring, digital,

What message do I want my reader to have? (highlight)
San Deigo Zoo has lot’s of awesome animals. - Bungy Jumpers
A virtual tour of a zoo is such a cool experience. - Hokey Pokeys
I learnt a lot about animals from this website. - Paua Shells
Virtual tours of a zoo isn’t as fun as a real zoo. - Whitebait fritters

Plan of my paragraph topics
1. Introduction
Orientates and hooks
2. Body Paragraph 1
Visiting san diego zoo and what was the tour like.
3. Body Paragraph 2
We looked at different kind of animals and explore our tour
4. Body Paragraph 3
What kind of facts and info did we get.
5. Conclusion
What I think about the San Diego Zoo



 From the past 2 days. My class and I have been working on our introductions and our plans. We had to think about our purpose and reader by planning our recounts.

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