Tuesday, 3 March 2015

River talks

Walt: write a detailed introduction with hook and orientation.

Omaru creek is full of dirt and shopping trolleys last week on friday three class went down to Omaru creek for a talk about keeping our creek clean, But back in the day Omaru creek was a happy place but now it full of dirt and shopping trolleys What can you do to help?
                                          Marked by my Partner Loseli

Our task today was to write a introduction without other paragraphs.And we are also trying to mark other peoples rubric an explain why we did that.

No comments:

Post a Comment

Note: only a member of this blog may post a comment.